Wonderful opening stanza -- what great rhythm you have in these images.
Oh, that first stanza--eavesdrops down her slender thread. Fantastic!
Me too. I absolutely love the first stanza.
I love the dark tone of the second stanza.
Love that "plain-sight hider" and the eavesdropping--wonderful images!
You've captured this arachnid femme fatale perfectly! Bravo! = )
This is an excellent poem! An eavesdropping spider, how utterly fantastic.
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