Tuesday, August 30, 2011

POETRY FRIDAY: Storm's Alarm


Irene walloped Rhode Island this week. My neighbors lost several old trees, and we came through unscathed though not unchanged:

Storm’s Alarm
By Steven Withrow


Asleep, we do not hear it snap—
That splintered limb
Succumb—
Or heed it rap our roof
And strike
The downspout dumb.

Awake, we think a bird’s deranged
A windowpane—
Chill rain
Has changed to hail—a gull?—
A gale—
A hurricane!


©2011 Steven Withrow, all rights reserved

4 comments:

Heidi Mordhorst said...

Steven, this is fabulous--
you're breathing Emily.
The form behooves
the stormy starts
and sounds them gleefully!

Myra Garces-Bacsal from GatheringBooks said...

Very lovely. In its forbidding, scary sense. Thank you for sharing your lovely poetry every Friday.

Tabatha said...

Nice work, Steven. Glad you are okay.

Mary Lee said...

I love the sound and feel of all of your words, but the last three lines...oh, my! Fabulous!